观察昆虫

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这是一篇观察日记，小作者通过仔细观察，描写了小蚂蚁觅食、运食的情景，在观察描写的同时加上了自己丰富的想象，让文章显得生动有趣。作者的笔下，给我们展示了一个童话般的蚂蚁王国，读来让人耳目一新，忍俊不禁。“我仿佛嗅到了蚂蚁的饭香，我多想进去与它们一起分享啊，可是我又怕惊吓到这些小精灵们”多么丰富的想象力，多么纯真可爱的孩子；“放学铃响了，小蚂蚁们都回家了，到了家小蚂蚁向父母回报一天学的什么，父母也许会批评它们，也许会表扬它们”小作者用自己的心想象着蚂蚁们的生活，好像自己就是这个王国的一员，对它们所有的一切都了如指掌，写得那么亲切自然。

This is an observation diary. The little author describes the scene of the small ants for food and food by carefully observing. While observing the description, it adds his rich imagination to make the article look vivid and interesting.In the author's pen, we show us a fairy -tale Ant Kingdom, which is refreshing and can't help it."I seem to smell the fragrance of ants, I want to go in to share with them, but I'm afraid of scaring these elf people."The ants went home. When they arrived at home, they returned to their parents what they learned. Parents may criticize them, and they may praise them. "The little authors imagine the lives of the ants with their own minds.Members, all of them are at all, they are so kind and natural.

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今天，我又趴在草丛边，在无限的静谧中，忘了世界也忘了自己。在我眼前，空间变大了，小草成了大森林。一只小蚂蚁，独自四处走动，发现了一块小面包渣，我想它一定是位高明的厨师，出来找一些东西做饭，现在它找到了，可是它搬不动，它转身往回走，来到洞穴里，不一会，蚂蚁厨师又带出了几位搬运工，它们齐心协力把食物搬了进去，今晚它们又有丰盛的晚餐喽！我仿佛嗅到了蚂蚁的饭香，我多想进去与它们一起分享啊，可是我又怕惊吓到这些小精灵们。蚂蚁的生活也很有规律，它们自己干着自己的事情：小蚂蚁们在学校上学，老师在教课，它们师生都那么认真，那么全神贯注。在小蚂蚁上学时，它们的家长在工作、上班。叮铃铃……放学铃响了，小蚂蚁们都回家了，到了家小蚂蚁向父母回报一天学的什么，父母也许会批评它们，也许会表扬它们。一只看上去非常得意的小蚂蚁，我想它一定是考了好成绩吧。一只蚂蚁强盗凶神恶煞的拦住一只蚂蚁居民，正好蚂蚁警察路过，把蚂蚁强盗抓住了，我想蚂蚁警察一定很高兴，因为它为人民做了一件好事。在农家小院升起炊烟，小狗的叫声才把我的心灵唤了回来。

Today, I lay on the grass again. In the infinite quiet, I forgot the world and forgot myself. In front of my eyes, the space became bigger, and the grass became a large forest. A little ant, walking around alone, and found a small bread residue. I think it must be a clever chef, come out to find something for cooking, but now it finds it, but it can't move, it turns around, and goes back. After coming to the cave, after a while, the ant chef brought out several porters. They worked together to move the food. Tonight they had a rich dinner! I seem to smell the ants of ants. I want to go in and share with them, but I am afraid of scaring these elf people. The life of ants is also very regular. They do their own things: the little ants are going to school, and the teachers are teaching. When the little ants were at school, their parents were working and working. Ding Lingzing ... After school, the little ants went home. When they arrived at home, they returned to their parents what they learned. Parents may criticize them and may praise them. A little ant looks very proud, I think it must have taken good results. A ant robber stopped a ant resident, just happened to pass by the Ant Police and grabbed the ants. I think the Ant Police must be very happy because it did a good thing for the people. The cooked smoke was raised in the farmhouse, and the puppy's shout called my heart back.

我愿拉着你的手，一起去蚂蚁的王国散散步。

I want to pull your hand and go to the ants of the ants to walk.